I had did some alterations, I personally enjoy practicality in certain components of a machine, which is what I think might make it more original in design.
I was also experimenting with circles too on the mobile suit. funny how this one is covered in circles eh?
Try and disregard the shield, its an incomplete design, hence WIP status.
Powerplant: Ultracompact Fusion Reactor, Power Output Rating Unknown
Equipment and design features: Sensors, Range Unknown; False IFF Code Module
Fixed armaments: 1x superheated scythe, mounted on back; 1x "Evil" Long Grappler Tail, mounted on hip armor in the back; 2x vulcan cannons, mounted in head; 2x machine gun cannons, mounted in torso
Optional fixed armaments: 1x 90mm Machine gun, clip-fed, 30 rounds per clip, mounted in hip armor; 1x Beam Saber, mounted in hip armor rack, contains an internal battery; 1x 90mm Machine Gun Cannon, mounted in top side of shield; 1x Shield
Yaaaaa the scythe is inspired by something I saw in an old hobby japan I have. not to mention the grappler from AOZ and the guns without a holder for a quick pullout though I regret the flip out stock though now; its impractical. so is the tail XD... but i have to follow specs so i'll revise it all, when inking.
Good job on the concept. Though as I told ya on MSN, the grappler tail thing should probably be put somewhere in the torso. Now that I look at it, it'd probably be better to give it two of the grappler arms, too.
As for the Machine gun, it should probably be a bit thinner in appearance and not so fat as to make it look like it should be a beam rifle.
I like the placement of the circles and triangles and whatnot, displaying where certain parts and access hatches are too.
Also, as you told me, the armaments are still WIP, so I'd expect that staff thing to look a little different later on, right?
But yeah, overall, it's an awesome design. Probably one of your best yet, even for a redraw. Lovin what you've done so far.
As for the Machine gun, it should probably be a bit thinner in appearance and not so fat as to make it look like it should be a beam rifle.
I like the placement of the circles and triangles and whatnot, displaying where certain parts and access hatches are too.
Also, as you told me, the armaments are still WIP, so I'd expect that staff thing to look a little different later on, right?
But yeah, overall, it's an awesome design. Probably one of your best yet, even for a redraw. Lovin what you've done so far.
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